Services Offered

Manuscript Services

  • Developmental Editing
  • Line Editing
  • FREE PERSONALIZED Sample Edits

NOTE: All paid services require a non-refundable 50% deposit of estimated total cost due with signed contract.

Questions? Email me at bloemker.joyce@gmail.com

Developmental Editing

This editing looks at the big picture of the story. It edits the story's ideas, concepts, and content.

I will look at Word Document for:

  • Plot
  • Characters
  • Structure
  • Craft

You will get:

  • A letter detailing strengths and weaknesses of each of the categories above, including many subcategories (including but not limited to: story arc, flow, conflict and tension, character development, scene structure, and chapter structure).
  • A basic outline of the plot and events.
  • Some in-text comments to highlight areas talked about in the letter.

Click here to read a blog post detailing developmental editing.

Pricing:

$25 USD per 1,000 words*

This edit will consist of two complete reads by the editor with revisions made in between readings by the author and a thirty-minute consultation call.

Questions? Email me at bloemker.joyce@gmail.com

* There may be an additional charge if the word count increases by 3,000 or more words for second reading.

Line Editing

This editing looks at the little pictures of the story. It edits how the story is told by looking at details and language.

I will look at Word Document for:

  • Wording
  • Flow
  • Readability
  • Style

You will get:

  • A short letter detailing suggested changes in each of the categories above, including many subcategories (including but not limited to: word choice/phrasing, sentence structure, consistency, transitions, pacing, language use, tone, chronological order, and clarity).
  • In-text comments on the document with suggestions.

Click here to read a blog post detailing line editing.

Pricing:

$30 USD per 1,000 words*

This edit will consist of two complete readings by the editor with revisions made in between readings by the author and a thirty-minute consultation call.

Questions? Email me at bloemker.joyce@gmail.com

* There may be an additional charge if the word count increases by 3,000 or more words for second reading.

Get the most out of your editing service

Tools I Use

  • I edit in Microsoft Word 365.
  • I follow the Chicago Manual of Style.
  • I use Merriam-Webster dictionary for American English.
  • I use Cambridge dictionary for British English.
  • I accept payment via PayPal only.

Genres I work in

  • Equestrian Fiction
  • Young Adult
  • Contemporary
  • Magical Realism
  • Fantasy
  • Romance
  • New Adult
  • Science Fiction

Read this blog post to learn more about the genres I work in.

Don't see your genre? Send me an email at bloemker.joyce@gmail.com to ask about it.

How to get a FREE PESONALIZED Sample Edit:

Email me at bloemker.joyce@gmail.com

Blog post about Sample Edits COMING SOON.

Help me help you

I like to have the following from you to help edit your story in the best way possible:

Full blog post COMING SOON.

NOTE:

Every author and manuscript is different. The exact areas I look at and detail back to you will vary depending on your strengths and weaknesses as a writer and what the manuscript needs.

NOTE:

I am not a fact checker and I highly suggest you find a copyeditor after developmental and/or line edits to catch any grammatical errors because that is not my main focus while editing. Learn more about copyediting here.